Hi Kinz,
Anybody who puts together a video and spending time on that deserves credits so there you go.
Comments - Feedback:
1. Word: I thought it was some sort of RPG because of the background posters ;-) is distracting;
2. Why did you shoot every app behind a different background. Go for one stage abd show the different apps in order. The story behind it is good but simplified.
Take in consideration why clients should use 2010. Whats the emphasis on 2010? Collaboration - sharepoint so make it clear that these apps work great in a sharepoint environment. Tell them about Access webdatabases.
Finally compliments on how the different package options are presented well done.
two markers: Volumelicenses and office 365? Those would be questions I would ask you about.
All in all a very good first step. A little tweaking here and there but you are on the right track ;-)
Maurice
Maurice